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I really enjoyed this. Wonderful story and music!

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Ronnie!!! It is so beautifully touching!!! Your metaphors are very beautiful and real, you can feel them not just read them. "Powdered road dust,"" Night blue skies sing a chorale"! I also love the reprise of the drangonfly. So it is interesting how I read the story: I first started listening to the piece stoped it for a bit, read the story and then finished listening to the end, it was amazingEmoji

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Thank you so much, Stella! I’m sure you’ve got the entire message, because you’re a musician and because you’ve heard the blue-stars chorale too… We’ve come such a long way, haven’t we❤️

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Love the story and way music’s incorporated into it. Beautiful

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I’m so glad you’ve read it! Thank you! ☺️

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Loved it!

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So beautiful! Very vivid, and the music is wonderful. ❤️

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Thank you, Katie, so glad you liked it! 😊

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A beautiful story with such touching interludes!

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Thank you, Ken! So glad that you liked it 😊

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So glad to have shared it with you 😊

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