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This was so good...

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Thank you K.Lynn! In the current times I so need a good word 😊

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Such a moving story. And so well written!

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Thank you, Nevena! Благодаря много! This is one of the first fiction stories I wrote, and I’d put so much into it, details and exposition, that the plot was almost gone. This resurrected version is much slimmer, and I hope clearer The joys of writing and learning the craft, right😊✍️

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Engaging story Ronnie, I loved the ending with the dropped cash. Wonderful.

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Thank you, Nancy! Sometimes these “rough man” come equipped with hearts of gold😊

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Superb!

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Thank you, Prince! Every good word for this piece is like a medal neither Aroha nor JC will ever get… 😊

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